class of 2010 - the remake

class of 2010 - the remake

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Recent Comments

Elyot Cyr
Elyot Cyr Sat, 02/06/2021 - 16:00

I know this is old but i saw it in the critique from and wanted to add a comment- I really love the layout, but i would add a bit more contrast, at least in the frames or something to make it pop more 😊

Dia Will
Dia Will Thu, 02/26/2015 - 07:56

very nice!

Lórien Rezende
Lórien Rezende Sun, 03/02/2014 - 05:47

Also @Hariett: Did you think on transform this sketch on a template? It´s a great one!

Lórien Rezende
Lórien Rezende Sun, 03/02/2014 - 05:45

Great job Kaleena! It´s better now...

Kaleena Farmer
Kaleena Farmer Thu, 02/27/2014 - 12:40

Thanks, Debra. The critique thread is neat. Hopefully more people will use it ^^

Debra Duxfield
Debra Duxfield Thu, 02/27/2014 - 12:32

LOVE the remake! only just saw the critique thread today. But so love how you refined this. A double is often hard to visualise I find. This is fantastic. (clever community - brainstorming at its best!!!)

Linda Cobbley
Linda Cobbley Sat, 02/22/2014 - 21:17

This really is a great layout I like the way you used the school color in it, but even if you didnt know it was the school color it would be a great page

Harriett Humphries
Harriett Humphries Sat, 02/22/2014 - 21:03

I'm so flattered that you like my sketch. I know you had lots of other good input that you also incorporated. This final iteration is wonderful.

Created By

Kaleena Farmer

Type of Project

Digital Scrapbook Layout

Colors

purple, black, gray

Tags

graduation, double page layout, sketch, layout critique

Description

I submitted my original layouts for a layout critique as I did not like the right side (this was the left side before which I did like) before the big blank spot just wasn't right for me.

I received lots of great input and suggestions - thank you everyone smiley. Harriet sent me this message:
I love the colors you're using on your layout. Purple, black, and white are classic. I think you may be looking for a different balance in the layout. What comes to my mind is a triangle. Not very good with verbal explanations, I made a sketch of what I would try. The only way I could figure to get it to you is by message. the sizes aren't correct but I hope this helps. Other than rebalancing, by moving a few things, and extending across the middle as others have suggested, I don't think you need to change another thing.
I love seeing your layouts. They are always so cheerful and uplifting.
Harriett

and drew this sketch for me which I love - thank you very much Harriet! (I still stand by my comment of when you are done with making layouts for yourself - which we all know will never happen smiley - you are more than welcome to make mine for me smiley as I smiley your work too!)

I really like the final results of this revision.

If you would like to submit one of your layouts for a layout critique go here.

I used Color Basics Purple and Grad to make this page.

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