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Recent Comments

Kate Elouise Grass
Kate Elouise Grass Wed, 07/16/2014 - 16:34

No problem Linda. I always find it a little tricky! It's your work and your creative expression :)

Linda Cobbley
Linda Cobbley Wed, 07/16/2014 - 07:45

Thank you Kate this is just the kind of feedback and critique I was hoping for!

Kate Elouise Grass
Kate Elouise Grass Tue, 07/15/2014 - 21:02

Hi Linda! Hope you enjoyed Sundance! I love that you've hunted around for things that fit Del's personality (I loved my Boxer too!).

I guess where I'd start with this is using a lighter background (and then using your lovley triangle paper as a paper strip). This will help with the visibility of the text and you can use a drop shadow instead of an outer glow on the elements.

If you group the elements, you'll have a bit more room to make the monogram bigger. Sorry, I struggle to explain things in words sometimes! I want to draw a picture hahaha....

Perhaps try working with your page split into thirds? ie the Monogram can live in the top two thirds, the elements in the bottom third? Have a play, see how you go!

Linda Cobbley
Linda Cobbley Tue, 07/15/2014 - 20:45

Thanks Kaleena I didnt realize that thread was there I have posted this in the Critique thread

Kaleena Farmer
Kaleena Farmer Tue, 07/15/2014 - 19:09

Great page - it is very Del. The purple text seems a little odd to me but I don't know what color would work better.

If you would like you could always submit this in the "Layout Critique Wanted" thread (you can read about it here -